scream pain and fire quest

[sorrow]

Hey bro no.worrys just making the list and checking it twice wanna c if this quest is naughty or nice...

[Pyrizzle]

Hero:
* sky wyrm can you tell me what happened to Ash?
* I don't care what happened to your city just get on with what you need help with.
* On second thought I wont help you (ends conversation to be restarted)
sky wyrm (aka old man):*Closes his eyes and trys to remember* It was early morning. The towns fires that lit our town streets were starting to go out. All of a sudden I herd a loud scream and then saw one of the towns farmers run by on fire.
Hero:
*Please go on
*I've herd enough good bye (ends conversation to be restarted)
Sky wyrm: As some of the villagers tried to help the poor man out by pouring water on him, the farmer screamed louder and the fire burned even stronger as tho the water was feeding the farmer.
Hero:
* but what caused the fire?
* this seems like it will go one forever can we speed things up?
* I'm done listening good bye (ends conversation to be restarted)
Sky wyrm: I decided to go to were the farmer lived (after he was dead of cores) and tell his family what had happened. But when I got there I saw these... These... these demons burning down his farm. His family was no where to be found. I fear that they to died.
Hero:
* Oh my God please go on.
* Ok are we almost done yet?
* I'm board so I'm just gonna go (ends conversation to be restarted)
Sky wyrm: I ran back to our village and rang the bell to alert the guards of trouble but they never showed up. The demons came and destroyed our town. Our warriors tried to fend off these demons but to of no use. They to were burned.

[New Dialog From Sorrow to be added to quest dialog. ]

will be back to fix it later when work isn't trying to kill me.

[sorrow]

I wanna thank you all for the role you all played in the process of making this quest. Starting with the basic idea I came up with. It eventually grew into this massive quest. From only one.simple quest grew a complex quest that led to makings of 2 other quest. Thank you all.

[Tomcat]

I wanna thank you all for the role you all played in the process of making this quest. Starting with the basic idea I came up with. It eventually grew into this massive quest. From only one.simple quest grew a complex quest that led to makings of 2 other quest. Thank you all.

Community creativity in action!

[sorrow]

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 monsters:
 [
  {
    "id": "Griffin",
    "name": "Griffin",
    "maxHP": 250,
    "maxAP": 12,
    "monsterClass": 4,
    "attackDamage": {
      "min": 25,
      "max": 30
    },
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    "attackChance": 220,
    "criticalSkill": 25,
    "criticalMultiplier": "2.5",
    "blockChance": 250,
    "damageResistance": 5
  },
  {
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    "monsterClass": 3,
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    "hitEffect": {
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          "duration": 10,
          "chance": 50,
          "condition": "splinters"
        }
      ]
    },
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    "attackCost": 6,
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    "damageResistance": 10
  },
  {
    "id": "Lesser Dark Fire Demon",
    "name": "Lesser Dark Fire Demon",
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    "maxAP": 12,
    "monsterClass": 2,
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      "max": 20
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          "condition": "Dark Burn Weak"
        }
      ]
    },
    "iconID": "monsters_wraiths:0",
    "droplistID": "LDFD",
    "attackCost": 4,
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    "blockChance": 190,
    "damageResistance": 5
  },
  {
    "id": "Dark Fire Demon",
    "name": "Dark Fire Demon",
    "maxHP": 100,
    "maxAP": 14,
    "monsterClass": 2,
    "attackDamage": {
      "min": 20,
      "max": 25
    },
    "hitEffect": {
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        {
          "magnitude": 1,
          "duration": 10,
          "chance": 20,
          "condition": "Dark Burn"
        }
      ]
    },
    "iconID": "monsters_wraiths:1",
    "droplistID": "DFD",
    "attackCost": 7,
    "attackChance": 155,
    "blockChance": 195,
    "damageResistance": 7
  },
  {
    "id": "Jezebeth",
    "name": "Jezebeth",
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    "maxAP": 12,
    "unique": 1,
    "monsterClass": 2,
    "attackDamage": {
      "min": 25,
      "max": 30
    },
    "hitEffect": {
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          "magnitude": 1,
          "duration": 15,
          "chance": 50,
          "condition": "Dark Burn Strong"
        }
      ]
    },
    "iconID": "monsters_wraiths:2",
    "droplistID": "Jezebeth",
    "attackCost": 12,
    "attackChance": 200,
    "blockChance": 199,
    "damageResistance": 10
  }
]

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 drop list:
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  {
    "id": "Griffin",
    "items": [
      {
        "quantity": {
          "min": 100,
          "max": 100
        },
        "itemID": "gold",
        "chance": 75
      },
      {
        "quantity": {
          "min": 1,
          "max": 4
        },
        "itemID": "broken feather",
        "chance": 50
      },
      {
        "quantity": {
          "max": 1
        },
        "itemID": "feather",
        "chance": 25
      },
      {
        "quantity": {
          "max": 1
        },
        "itemID": "Phoenix egg",
        "chance": 25
      }
    ]
  },
  {
    "id": "Tree Walkers",
    "items": [
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          "max": 110
        },
        "itemID": "gold",
        "chance": 75
      },
      {
        "quantity": {
          "max": 1
        },
        "itemID": "oak gall",
        "chance": 25
      },
      {
        "quantity": {
          "min": 1,
          "max": 5
        },
        "itemID": "oak planks",
        "chance": 50
      }
    ]
  },
  {
    "id": "LDFD",
    "items": [
      {
        "quantity": {
          "min": 100,
          "max": 100
        },
        "itemID": "gold",
        "chance": 75
      },
      {
        "quantity": {
          "min": 1,
          "max": 3
        },
        "itemID": "Major Health Potins",
        "chance": 50
      },
      {
        "quantity": {
          "min": 1,
          "max": 1
        },
        "itemID": "Essence of Fire",
        "chance": 25
      }
    ]
  },
  {
    "id": "DFD",
    "items": [
      {
        "quantity": {
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          "max": 150
        },
        "itemID": "gold",
        "chance": 75
      },
      {
        "quantity": {
          "min": 1,
          "max": 5
        },
        "itemID": "Major Health Potion",
        "chance": 50
      },
      {
        "quantity": {
          "min": "q",
          "max": 1
        },
        "itemID": "Essence of Fire",
        "chance": 25
      }
    ]
  },
  {
    "id": "Jezebeth",
    "items": [
      {
        "quantity": {
          "min": 1000,
          "max": 1000
        },
        "itemID": "gold",
        "chance": 100
      },
      {
        "quantity": {
          "min": 5,
          "max": 5
        },
        "itemID": "Major Health Potion",
        "chance": 100
      },
      {
        "quantity": {
          "min": 1,
          "max": 1
        },
        "itemID": "Sword of Shadows Fire",
        "chance": 100
      },
      {
        "quantity": {
          "min": 1,
          "max": 1
        },
        "itemID": "Wing of the Demon",
        "chance": 100
      }
    ]
  }
]

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 actor conditions:
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  {
    "id": "Splinters",
    "name": "splinters",
    "isStacking": 1,
    "roundEffect": {
      "visualEffectID": -1,
      "increaseCurrentHP": {
        "min": -20,
        "max": -20
      }
    },
    "iconID": "actorconditions_1:56",
    "category": 2
  },
  {
    "id": "Dark Burn Weak",
    "name": "Dark Burn Weak",
    "roundEffect": {
      "visualEffectID": -1,
      "increaseCurrentHP": {
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        "max": -10
      }
    },
    "abilityEffect": {
      "increaseAttackDamage": {
        "min": -10,
        "max": -10
      },
      "increaseAttackCost": "p",
      "increaseAttackChance": -20
    },
    "iconID": "actorconditions_1:19",
    "category": 2
  },
  {
    "id": "Shadows Burn",
    "name": "Shadows Burn",
    "roundEffect": {
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      "increaseCurrentHP": {
        "min": -10,
        "max": -10
      }
    },
    "abilityEffect": {
      "increaseAttackChance": -10
    },
    "iconID": "actorconditions_1:19",
    "category": 2
  },
  {
    "id": "Dark Burn",
    "name": "Dark Burn",
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      "increaseCurrentHP": {
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        "max": -15
      }
    },
    "abilityEffect": {
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        "max": -15
      },
      "increaseAttackChance": -25
    },
    "iconID": "actorconditions_1:19",
    "category": 2
  },
  {
    "id": "Dark Burn Strong",
    "name": "Dark Burn Strong",
    "roundEffect": {
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      "increaseCurrentHP": {
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        "max": -15
      }
    },
    "abilityEffect": {
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        "min": -20,
        "max": -20
      },
      "increaseAttackChance": -30
    },
    "iconID": "actorconditions_1:19",
    "category": 2
  }
]

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 item:
 [
  {
    "id": "Sword of Shadows Fire",
    "name": "Sword of Shadows Fire",
    "displaytype": 3,
    "category": "lsword",
    "equipEffect": {
      "increaseAttackDamage": {
        "min": 5,
        "max": 10
      },
      "increaseAttackCost": 4,
      "increaseAttackChance": 25,
      "increaseCriticalSkill": 15,
      "setCriticalMultiplier": "2.0"
    },
    "hitEffect": {
      "increaseCurrentHP": {
        "min": -10,
        "max": -10
      },
      "conditionsTarget": [
        {
          "magnitude": 1,
          "condition": "Shadows Burn",
          "duration": 5,
          "chance": 20
        }
      ]
    },
    "iconID": "items_weapons_3:12",
    "description": "Sword said to be created from the Shadows own Fire."
  }
]

• Items not coded:
  Essence of Fire
  Broken feather
  Feather
  Oak gall
  Oak plank
  Wing of the demon

Some of the monster have no image because only like half of the monster images came up. [/color]

[Pyrizzle]

Wow! Nice work there sorrow!

Working on more of the quest information now. (Luckily it's slow today!)

[sorrow]

For sure bro I'm trying to figure out this freenode thing right now. I'm sitting on a lot of time on my hands here and.some1 gave me the site to write code so I'd hehe. Thank you

[Pyrizzle]

[Updated with newly added dialog]
Color Guide:
Red = new content
Blue = flavor text (just tells of location or what you just did)
normal text = Added before
Strike = removed text
[Bold] = an action or reward
~Work in Progress~
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
"Our hero (aka you) comes across a small encampment were you find an old man among the encampment who asks for your help."

Old man: Please young boy help us!
Hero:
*What do you need help with old man?
*Whatever old man. (ends conversation, can be restarted)
Old man: We are from the village Ash.
Old man: One day we were betrayed by the Feygard guards sent to defend our villages.
Hero:
*What? The Feygard guards would never do such a thing. You're lying old man! (ends conversation, can be restarted)
* Sky Wyrm can you tell me what happened to Ash?
* I don't care what happened to your city just get on with what you need help with.
* On second thought I wont help you (ends conversation to be restarted)
sky wyrm (aka old man):*Closes his eyes and trys to remember* It was early morning. The town's fires that lit our streets were starting to go out. All of a sudden I heard a loud scream and then saw one of the farmers run by on fire.
Hero:
*Please go on
*I've herd enough good bye (ends conversation to be restarted)
Sky Wyrm: As some of the villagers tried to help the poor man by pouring water on him, the farmer screamed louder and the fire burned even stronger as though the water was feeding the farmer.
Hero:
* But what caused the fire?
* This seems like it will go one forever can we speed things up?
* I'm done listening good bye (ends conversation to be restarted)
Sky Wyrm: I decided to go to where the farmer lived to tell his family what had happened, but when I got there I saw these... These... these demons burning down his farm. His family was no where to be found. I fear that they too were burned alive.
Hero:
* Oh my God please go on.
* Ok are we almost done yet?
* I'm bored so I'm just gonna go (ends conversation to be restarted)
Sky wyrm: I ran back to our village and rang the alert to the guards of trouble but they never showed up. The demons came and destroyed our town. Our warriors tried to fend off these demons but they were all wiped out. They too were burned to ashes.
Old man: Our village is overrun by monsters that burn everything they touch.
Old man: We here are the only ones that got away alive. We fear that if they are not stopped that they will spread and eventually destroy everything.
Hero:
*Okay old man, I will help you destroy this evil.
*No way old man your story is full of lies and I should report you to the Feygard guards and see what they have to say. (ends conversation to be restarted)
Old man: oh good, but before you go destroy this evil you must first find the map maker.
Old man: last I heard he went to Stoutford to get away from everything.
Hero:
*ok, I will go to Stoutford and seek the map maker.
*This sounds like something you should deal with on your own (End conversation, can be restarted)
*Alright but there better be some kind of reward in the end.

"After talking to the old man of ash. He sends you to find the map maker and believes he's in Stoutford."

You travel to Stoutford to find the map maker.(placement will be determined by Tom if he wishes)

Map maker:*looking scared* who are you? What do you want?
Hero:
* I'm looking for a map maker from Ash. Are you him?
* I forget why I am here. (ends conversation to be restarted)
Map maker: Yes I am the map maker. Did Ash survived? Can I go back now? That's why you came right? To tell me I can go home?
Hero:
* Well no I'm sorry to say that the city of Ash has been destroyed. All that's left is a small encampment.
* I'm sorry but the city of Ash is now just a pile of ashes.
Map maker:* crying* Why? Why did those monsters destroy our town?
Hero:
* I don't know but I will find out. That's why I need the map, do you have it?
* I don't know and don't care. Do you have the map I need?
Map maker: Well that's the problem. All my map making supplies were destroyed in ash. If you are able to get the supplies I need, I can make you the map you seek.
Hero:
* Ok, what supplies do you need?
* I don't need the map that bad (ends conversation to be restarted)
* This better be worth it.
Map maker: In order to make the map I require 5 Arulir skin, 10 dead spiders, a Griffin feather, and a gall from an Oaken.
Hero:
* Where can I find a Griffin?
Map maker: I haven't seen a Griffin in years. Last I herd they live up in high places.
Hero
* Where can I find an Oaken?
Map maker: The Oakens live in the forest south of here. Please be careful, the Oakens have been known to take out their enemies even after being stricken down. The splinters they shoot out are quite poisonous to humans.
Hero:
* What was it I needed again?
* Where can I find a Griffin?
* Where can I find an oaken?
* I will be right back with the supplies you need. (ends conversation, if you return he asks "Have you found my supplies yet?" then gives you the options listed above again)

"After retrieving the items to make the map you return to the map maker."

Map maker: Did you find my supplies yet?
Hero:
* No not yet. (ends conversation to be restarted)
* Yes, here they are.
* Where can I find a Griffin?
* Where can I find the oakens?
Map maker: Thank you! These will work perfectly.
[You gain 75xp ]
Map maker: While you were gone I found the map u wanted. It was in my pocket this whole time. Funny right?
Hero:
* So I did all that for nothing?
* Very funny.
Map maker: In return for your help, if you ever need a map I'll make you one free of charge.

(map maker can make maps to unknown treasure caves)
[You receive the map]

[Update Quest log, this portion is complete you can now continue on]

"After fighting your way past the dark fire monsters you see their leader standing next to the Feygard commander."

Jezebeth: Awww... so your the one who has been interrupting my plans...
Hero:
* What's going on here?
* Yeah I'm the one that's messing up your plans! Why are you just standing there commander?
* Why is a Feygard commander here?
Jezebeth: The commander is my puppet.
Jezebeth: I bribed him into believing that he will receive riches beyond his wildest dreams if he were to have his troops leave the village of Ash.
Hero:
*but why?
*Why would you do such an awful thing?
Jezebeth : Just for the fun of it... I love hearing you pathetic humans scream in pain and burned by my fire muahahahah!
Commander: I did what you asked NOW WHERE'S MY GOLD!?!?!?!
Jezebeth: You are of no use to me anymore.
Commander: *Becomes consumed by dark fire and screams in agony and is then killed*
Jezebeth: Hahaha yes that is the scream I love.
Jezebeth: Now it's your turn to feel the burn muahahahaha!!!!!
Hero:
*For the shadow you will die!
*Just shut up and die already!
*Please don't hurt me!!!
[Enter Fight with Jezebeth ]
[UPDATE QUEST LOG]

"After destroying the dark fire demon Jezebeth and receiving the wing of the demon you leave the cave,"

Old man: Did you kill them?
Hero:
* Yes I slayed their leader Jezebeth, and here's proof.
* No not yet (ends conversation, can be restarted)
* Can you tell me your story again? (old man retells the story)
Old man: What's this? ... This can't be... Yes it is! Its the wing from Jezebeth !!!
Old man: *Over joyed* You did it! You actually did it!!!
Old man: Oh thank you! Thank you very much! How can we ever repay you?

[ you receive 1000 XP and 500 gold] [Quest is finished]

Old man: Oh please young hero; please allow me to give you a blessing of the shadow.
Hero:
*Sure
*Ill pass thank you. (ends conversation. Is restarted from Old Man last sentence "oh please young hero")
[You receive: Blessing of the Shadow]
Old man: Thank you again hero.


-------------------------------------------------Updates in this version -----------------------
* Changes item requested my mapmaker from Pheonix Feather to Griffin Feather (Can't get to phoenix until after defeating the Demon boss.
* Removed strike text to make it easier to read
* Inserted cue for beginning of the Fight with Demon Boss (Name will be added later)
* Changed Griffin Quill to Griffin Feather... a feather is found, A quill is made. (a quill is an altered feather)
* Demon Boss's name changed to Jezebeth
* Old Man's name changed to _______________
----------------------------Updates from today------------------------------------------------
*Hmmmm i think this is a good spot to fit in the new information. (I kept it in red)
* Finished Changing Boss to Jezabeth
*removed a line or two that ends conversation, we do not need an exit on every one.

-------------Suggestions------------------------------------------------------------------
Name Generator <------ Need help coming up with names?
* Old Man: Needs a new name?
* Change Map Maker to "Cartographer" (It's the real name for that profession)

[Pyrizzle]

(Sorry to double post but my last one got quite long and i need separation)


Sorrow:

Starting from:

"Old man: Oh good, but before you go destroy this evil you must first find the map maker.
Old man: last I heard he went to Stoutford to get away from everything."

Can we get a reason why you must hunt down the map maker to find the Demon's location? (Just a line or two will do)

I know... I am a sucker for the fine details that make the story pop.

Hope you like what you see right now. It's looking pretty good right now, I will be printing out a copy tonight to take home with me so i can read it over once again to be sure all the details needed are in the story.

Old Man (Sky Wyrm) : Needs a name (not too fond of the name right now)
Map Maker: Cartographer or a name would be great for this NPC
Commander (Feygard betrayer): How about a last name to go with his title... example "Commander Chris".


EVERYONE:

Anybody who is good with grammar and punctuation. Please give what i have a look over and Post any spelling errors or sentences that could be worded better. (I'm working on it myself, but the more eyes on it the better i always say)

[sorrow]

"Old man: Oh good, but before you go destroy this evil you must first find the map maker.
Old man: last I heard he went to Stoutford to get away from everything."

Can we get a reason why you must hunt down the map maker to find the Demon's location? (Just a line or two will do)

Old man = Stephen

Commander = Commander Judist

Map maker = Cartographer

Reason to hunt down the map maker: He was.one who was trying to map out the world. People of Ash don't know were the cave is but the cartographer may no of such a cave.

sky wyrm (aka old man):*Closes his eyes and trys to remember* It was early morning. The town's fires that lit our streets were starting to go out. All of a sudden I heard a loud scream and then saw one of the farmers run by on fire.

I think it would sound better if the towns fires that lit our streets were starting to go out. If we change fires to torches so it reads:

The towns torches ,witch lit our streets, started to go out.

Sky Wyrm: As some of the villagers tried to help the poor man by pouring water on him, the farmer screamed louder and the fire burned even stronger as though the water was feeding the farmer.

Change farmer to fire so it reads:

Sky Wyrm: As some of the villagers tried to help the poor man by pouring water on him, the farmer screamed louder and the fire burned even stronger as though the water was feeding the fire.

Sky wyrm: I ran back to our village and rang the alert to the guards of trouble but they never showed up. The demons came and destroyed our town. Our warriors tried to fend off these demons but they were all wiped out. They too were burned to ashes.

Change so it reads: Sky wyrm: I ran back to our village and ring the alarm to alert the guards of trouble but they never showed up. The demons came and destroyed our town. Our warriors tried to fend off these demons but they were no match for them. They too were burned to ashes.

just read it threw and those are the errors I found other then that I think were one step closer to writing the code for this quest. YAY! Good job Pyro.