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Re: Journey of a Feygard Officer
Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2015 8:07 am
by lakra
Added Day XXIV
Re: Journey of a Feygard Officer
Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2015 10:54 pm
by Zukero
It's great that you keep on writing it.
What's not great, is that I couldn't keep up.... and thus, reading your adventure is hanging somewhere on my ToDo list.
I'll send my comments as soon as I managed to catch up with you !
Given such a prolific talent as an author, how would you like to actually create new stories for inclusion in-game ?
Re: Journey of a Feygard Officer
Posted: Thu Mar 19, 2015 6:51 am
by lakra
Zukero wrote:It's great that you keep on writing it.
What's not great, is that I couldn't keep up.... and thus, reading your adventure is hanging somewhere on my ToDo list.
I'll send my comments as soon as I managed to catch up with you !
Given such a prolific talent as an author, how would you like to actually create new stories for inclusion in-game ?
Thank you very much for the kind reply.
We already had a little conversation via PM about creating quests. Honestly, I tried to work myself through all the tutorials to create a little quest. But the harder thing for me was to get an idea for one. I didn't want to make a collect x items then get reward quest. I wanted to give it a bit of a storyline, to better fit with the game. But that is way easier said, then done. My deepest respect to all the quest writers creating such great stories like the one with the witch in Remgard.
What I would love to try is creating shorter or longer stories to describe the country and the background of the game, maybe to give an environment for quest writers. The wiki is already a nice collection of some backgrounds (especially Feygard - Nor City differences).
Maybe you could PM me, what you had in mind with that or how I could help there?
Re: Journey of a Feygard Officer
Posted: Thu Mar 19, 2015 8:03 am
by ace
awesome and interesting story.
Re: Journey of a Feygard Officer
Posted: Thu Mar 19, 2015 9:02 am
by lakra
Added Day XXV - XXVII
Re: Journey of a Feygard Officer
Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2016 6:25 pm
by lakra
I awoke, lying at the riverside, twinkling 'cause the sun shined right onto my face. My hands slided along my body, until they reached this little bloody wound. Where am I? Who did this? I turned my head around. Then I saw the creature. It moved towards myself, toxic stingers at his claws, his tail.
I could see the dark shadows of a nearby cave, looking like an entry to the mountains. I tried to stand up. I tried to focus. The rings on my fingers, they seemed like a burden too heavy to carry.
The lights went off again.
What happens to me?
Where am I?
The voices started to whisper again.
The shadow of the woman from my dreams, it tried to remember her voice. It was like all was hidden behind the fog of my fading memories.
My wife... what happened to my wife...?
And there he was again... the evil laughing kid was back... Lakra... I almost forgot him, just dreaming the dream of never ending nothingness. He reminded me, reminded me to continue. Continue my journey...
Re: Journey of a Feygard Officer
Posted: Thu Aug 25, 2016 12:37 am
by Tomcat
lakra wrote:rijackson741 wrote:Bitten corpses? You've lost me a bit there.
Very cool sorry so far! I find myself wondering what Goram will do next.
No worries about the English. At some point I might enjoy editing for you, but rather to busy right now.
Thanks!