Journey of a Feygard Officer

[rijackson741]

. Of course. I should have realized that

[lakra]

- updated Day XI

[Nut]

Hi Lakra,
I really like reading your story!
Especially the idea not to have Lakra tell it, but another person, who has his own thougts about that strange kid!

[lakra]

Hi Lakra,
I really like reading your story!
Especially the idea not to have Lakra tell it, but another person, who has his own thougts about that strange kid!

Thank you very much. It is always nice to get feedback, so there are some people who actually read the story .

I' m currently thinking about if it would be better to release parts of the story as little chapters instead of doing it daywise.

[lakra]

- Jan. 19. 2015 Day XII and Day XIX implemented, decided to organize the story in chapters. Chapter One is finished by now

[pez]

groovy story thanks

[lakra]

I just recognized some faults in the background of the story (actually, there is no King in Feygard. Instead it is ruled by Lord Gr-I-don't-remember-anymore). I read the existing descriptions which can be found on the wiki from this site. Even if I'll have to rewrite some parts of the story, it offered me some options to describe Goram's background and even the conflict between Feygard and Nor City in a better way.

So there won't be new story releases until I finished this

[Usirim]

Call me Hessie James

[lakra]

It's been a while and I couldn't go on due to a lack of time. But at least I could add Day XXII. There are still plenty of ideas for the story but I need to find some time for the writing stuff

[lakra]

Added Day XXIII.
Tried to turn the story in a darker fashion with strange visions and a starting connection between the religious aspects of the game (like the shadow cult).