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Re: Journey of a Feygard Officer

Posted: Sat Jan 17, 2015 1:34 pm
by rijackson741
:lol: . Of course. I should have realized that :)

Re: Journey of a Feygard Officer

Posted: Sat Jan 17, 2015 8:37 pm
by lakra
- updated Day XI

Re: Journey of a Feygard Officer

Posted: Sat Jan 17, 2015 8:53 pm
by Nut
Hi Lakra,
I really like reading your story!
Especially the idea not to have Lakra tell it, but another person, who has his own thougts about that strange kid!

Re: Journey of a Feygard Officer

Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2015 7:10 am
by lakra
Nut wrote:Hi Lakra,
I really like reading your story!
Especially the idea not to have Lakra tell it, but another person, who has his own thougts about that strange kid!
Thank you very much. It is always nice to get feedback, so there are some people who actually read the story :) .

I' m currently thinking about if it would be better to release parts of the story as little chapters instead of doing it daywise.

Re: Journey of a Feygard Officer

Posted: Mon Jan 19, 2015 3:04 pm
by lakra
- Jan. 19. 2015 Day XII and Day XIX implemented, decided to organize the story in chapters. Chapter One is finished by now

Re: Journey of a Feygard Officer

Posted: Tue Jan 20, 2015 11:05 am
by pez
groovy story :-) thanks

Re: Journey of a Feygard Officer

Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2015 6:59 am
by lakra
I just recognized some faults in the background of the story (actually, there is no King in Feygard. Instead it is ruled by Lord Gr-I-don't-remember-anymore). I read the existing descriptions which can be found on the wiki from this site. Even if I'll have to rewrite some parts of the story, it offered me some options to describe Goram's background and even the conflict between Feygard and Nor City in a better way.

So there won't be new story releases until I finished this ;-)

Re: Journey of a Feygard Officer

Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2015 8:38 am
by Usirim
Call me Hessie James :) :) :D

Re: Journey of a Feygard Officer

Posted: Thu Mar 12, 2015 1:57 pm
by lakra
It's been a while and I couldn't go on due to a lack of time. But at least I could add Day XXII. There are still plenty of ideas for the story but I need to find some time for the writing stuff ;-)

Re: Journey of a Feygard Officer

Posted: Sat Mar 14, 2015 8:24 pm
by lakra
Added Day XXIII.
Tried to turn the story in a darker fashion with strange visions and a starting connection between the religious aspects of the game (like the shadow cult).