Well I'm just trying to make every1 happy
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Our hero (aka you) comes across a small encampment were you find an old man among the encampment who asks for your help.
Old man: please young boy help us!
Hero: what do u need help with old man?
What ever old man (ends convo to be restarted)
Old man: we are from the village Ash.
Old man: one day we were betrayed by the faygard guards sent to defend our villages.
Hero: What the faygard guards would never do such a thing your lying old man (ends convo to be restarted)
Please going on.
Old man: our village was over runner by monsters that burned everything they touched.
Old man: our fighters tried to fend them off but to no luck they were all burned alive.
Old man: we here are the only ones that got away alive and we fear that if they are not stopped that they will destroy the world.
Hero: ok old man I will help you destroy this evil
No way old man your story is full of lies and I shall report you to the faygard guards so they can determine what to do with you and your lies (ends convo to be restarted)
After fighting your way past the dark fire monsters you the boss standing next to the faygard commander.
Boss:awww... so your the one who has been interrupting my plans...
Hero: what's going on here?
Heck ya I'm the one that's messing up ur plans! Why are u just standing there commander?
Why is a faygard commander here?
Boss: the commander is my puppet.
Boss: I bribed him into believing that he will receive riches beyond his wildest dreams if he were to have his troops leave the village of Ash.
Hero: but why?
Boss: just for the fun of it... I love hearing you pathetic humans scream in pain and burned by my fire muahahahah!
Commander: I did what you asked NOW WERES MY GOLD!?!?!?!
boss: you are of no use to me anymore.
Commander:*becomes consumed by dark fire and screams in agony and is then killed*
Boss: hahaha yes that is the scream I love.
Boss: no its your turn to feel the burn muahahahaha!!!!!
Hero: for the shadow you will die!
Just shut up and die already!
Please don't hurt me!!!!
After defeting the monster and finding the wing of the demon you return to the old man from ash.
Old man: did you kill them?
Hero: yes they are dead and here's proof.
No not yet (ends convo to be restarted)
Can you tell me your story again?(old man restelle the story)
Old man: what's this... this can't be... yes it is its the wing for that demon!!!
Old man: *over joyed* you did it! You actually did it!
Old man: oh thank you thank you very much how can we ever repay you!
[ you receive 1000 XP and 500 gold]
Old man: oh please young hero please allow me to give you a blessing of the shadow.
Hero: sure
Ill pass thank you tho (ends convo to be restarted)
You receive the blessing of the shadow. Blessing of the shadow increase by one skill.
Old man: thank you hero.
Monster and item stats:
Lesser Dark Fire Demon:
AP:4
Hp:50
Ad:15-20
AC:150%
Block:190%
Dr:5
On target:
Dark burn- last 5 rounds
10% chance
Lowers AC 20%
Lowers ad 10
Looses 10 hp per round
Drops:
0-100 gold
300 xp (quick learner at 0)
2 major health potions
Essence of fire (can be sold for 9 gold)
Dark Fire Demon:
AP:7
Hp:100
Ad:20-25
AC:155%
Block:195%
Dr:7
On target:
Dark burn- last 10 rounds
20% chance
Lowers AC 25%
Lowers ad 15
Lose 15 hp per round
Drops:
0-150 gold
350 XP (quick learner at 0)
4 major health potions
Essence of fire (can be sold for 9 gold)
Dark Fire Demon Master (boss):
AP:12
Hp:250
Ad:25-30
AC:200%
Block:199%
Dr:10
On target:
Dark burn- last 15 rounds
50% chance
Lowers AC 30%
Lowers ad 20
Lose 15 hp per round
Drops:
1000 gold
1000 XP
5 major health potions
Sword of Shadows Fire (weapon)
Wing of the Demon (return item to old man)
Sword of Shadows Fire:
AP:4
AC:25%
Ad:5-10
Increase critical skill:15
Critical multiplier: 2.0
On target:
Shadows burn- last 5 rounds
20% chance
Lowers AC 10%
Lose 10 hp per round
Last edited by Pyrizzle on Sun Jun 02, 2013 11:49 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Reason:Combined Double Posts
IMO currently this quest is a bit boring.. you meet a guy and the you slay the bad guy.
How about some "side quest" like;
-before you can enter the "pit" you need to find something
-before you can meet "the boss" you meet some other npc and you need to bring to him something
-etc
It is better to have way too much information and to have the less developed (or less interesting) parts trimmed than to not have enough and end up with work that isn't very good.
Either way, i like the start you have here. I would love to see more development to this.
Sarumar: Great suggestions and constructive criticism. +1 to you my friend.
I'm planing on Having the player get a map to the place were the demons on. Among the survivors there was a map maker who knows were the cave is but sense all his supplies were destroyed you will have to get new supplies for him to make u the map. Items need will b the alurie skin (the hippo looking things on the road to remgard) empty vile dead spiders and other items will come to me later. Then once u get all these items the map maker tells u that while you were getting these items that he had the map in his pocket the whole time. Also to get to the boss you have to go threw the maze like in bws with The different color crystals but in every crystal there's a monster that only gets harder
sorrow wrote:Ok saru ill figure out something for you
... thank you (but please do not make anything against or for Sarumar....This buil is overpovered...)... I love to see more content about this quest idea !
Saru your right these quest in the current version were to easy only took me.about a week.to complete the quest and that wasn't playing all the time. If I can this quest hard it my be worth putting it in the game to give players something to.challenge them
... harsh. me ... no.. 
